MARY SUE'S ((Please Read!!!))

[Tamara George]

Ok, so now I have your attention xD

I was just wondering what the traits or combination of traits everyone finds most annoying in a character, by that I mean in the way of being PERFECT.

Why do I want to know? Because as you may have seen I have a new charrie called Mary Sue (pfft bet you can't beat a name that imaginative! xD) and she's, in short, the definition of a Mary Sue...at least for the moment...before she starts showing how crazy evil she is xD

I need her to be...more annoyingly Mary Sue like...and I need some bloody help! xD

At the moment all she really does is:

- Go on and on about her dead parents.
- Cry at random (mostly over dead parents).
- Occasionally cry about how bitterly unfair being so perfect is.
- Cry over her dead parents.
- Talk about the locket her dead parents left her.
- Cry over dead parents.
- Talk about how she helps out at the animal shelter and homeless shelter and how she wants to dedicate her life to helping others.
- Cry over dead parents.
- Plot destroying the lives of everyone around her
- Smile time...oh wait! She can't smile! That's wasting valuable time where she could be crying over her dead parents!

...get's kind of repetitive, don't you think? Also any plots that you want to do with her, either when she's all evilly or right now are more than welcome. So if you want a charrie to annoy the hell out of you AND your charrie, be generally better at EVERYTHING your charrie does and do it all with smile, you're in the right place.

Warning: When she's evil she's pretty much every type of bitch you could possibly be, need a villan? Here she is!! xD

So now I've finished sounding like an advert...which was actually really unintentional, ideas welcome, I guess you'd put any plots on her plot page...but if you can't be bothered, just do it here.

Oh and for funzies, here's the link for the Mary Sue test if you want to try it out ;P

I'll give you two because the first I couldn't make head or bloody tails of it xD <--- *not so smart moment xD*

Mary Sue Test 1

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[Semper Capone]

-stereotypical teenage!girl prissy prissy voice-

LYKE, OMR! SHE MUST, LIKE, BE PERFECT AT, LIKE, EVERYTHING! EVERYTHING SHE, LIKE, TRIES!

xDDDDDx -shoots self in foot-

I think I took one of those tests & it said that Semp was a Gary Sue... XDD -papts Semp-

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[Tamara George]

Gah that pisses me off too! xD
Oh my bejeezus! I so have to make a charrie like Gretchen from Mean Girls with that voice!... I'll make it Tam's daughter *evil laugh* xDDDDDDDD

I did the Mary Sue test for Tam and she got a total of 23 (the 2nd one), I actually laughed when it said 'does she often lose her temper and yell at other people' <--- Yes, she does, very frequently xDDDD But then it also said

'Tamara George is nothing like you. She isn't really very cool: she blends into crowds, she hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes her run into things. There's never been anything special about her that she could see; boy, is she in for a surprise. She's come in for her share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And she's gotten no slack from you.'

There is NO WAY Tam EVER hangs out on the 'fringes' of a party xDDDD and Semp is NOT Gary Stu, he's just scarily nice! xD

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According to tht efirst one Chicago is a Mary Sue on an epic scale, but that one confused me in parts so i ignored it :S

The second one gave me a score of 47, and this little summary:

"Chicago Eastlyn is suspiciously similar to you as you'd like to be. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to. She may have sometimes thought that she was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. She's come in for her share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever she gains, she's worked for.

You may have let yourself get a little too close to Chicago Eastlyn. Maybe she's you as you wish you were, or maybe you're just afraid no one will like her and are trying to give her a free ride. Have some confidence in your writing! Chicago Eastlyn is a good character. Give her room to be herself before you stifle her."

Ahaha

[Semper Capone]

Scarily nice xDDD

&& I got a 70 on the first test. e.e xD




Semper Capone is suspiciously similar to you as you'd like to be. He isn't really very cool: he blends into crowds, he hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes him run into things. He may have sometimes thought that he was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. He's come in for his share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And he's gotten no slack from you.

In general, you care deeply about Semper Capone, but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. Semper Capone is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him.




Score Breakdown
He's Got My Nose 20
You Mean Plaid Is Out? 9
I'm Destined For What? 8
Can't Complain 5
Momma HATES Him! 0
Total: 42





Yay! He's not a Gary Stu! XDD <333 -hugglesqieshes Semp-

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[Sage Amato]

Sage Amato is only a little like you. He may be popular, or he may not, but no matter what he's impossible to ignore; he stands out... just the way you always wanted to. He may have sometimes thought that he was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. He's come in for his share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever he gains, he's worked for.

In general, you care deeply about Sage Amato, but you're smart enough to let him stand on his own, without burdening him with your personal fantasies or propping him up with idealization and over-dramatization. Sage Amato is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of him.

Score Breakdown
I Love Him, I Let Him Go 9
Yo! 16
I'm Destined For What? 6
Can't Complain 6
Spare the Rod and Spoil the Child 5
Total: 42

[Xi Coleman]

I'm not a Mary Sue. YAY!

[kyle mccure]

My test basically said Kyle is loud and annoying. And get alot of attention, he has a hard life and deals with it by being alone.. how true ^.^
he is so not a mary sue

[Abigail "Abby" Maine]

RESULTS : FOR ABBY

Abby isn't a character: she's you, or you as you'd like to be. She isn't really very cool: she blends into crowds, she hangs out on the fringes at parties, and wearing shades after dark makes her run into things. She may have sometimes thought that she was special, or destined for greater things, but probably dismissed the idea as a fantasy. She's got no emotional scars to speak of. And you've been sparing with the free handouts: whatever she gains, she's worked for.

In general, you care deeply about Abby, but you're smart enough to let her stand on her own, without burdening her with your personal fantasies or propping her up with idealization and over-dramatization. Abby is a healthy character with a promising career ahead of her.

Score Breakdown
Mirror, Mirror 24
You Mean Plaid Is Out? 5
I'm Destined For What? 3
Healthy as a Horse 0
Spare the Rod and Spoil the Child 9
Total: 41